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    dots Submission Name: Little Christmas Music Boxdots
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    Author: Cai
    ASL Info:    17/f/MA
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 1162/401/71
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 337
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       This is so old. I wrote it when I was 13.


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    dotsLittle Christmas Music Boxdots
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    There was a little Christmas music box,
    From my mom it came,
    Opened up the cover,
    That is how it sang,
    It sang a sweet tune,
    One I can't remember,
    Because little Christmas music boxes,
    Don't sing forever,
    I'd open up the cover,
    Hoping while I listened,
    To hear something, anything,
    To tell me what was missing,
    I'd try it every day,
    Doing whatever I could,
    but I knew what was missing,
    It was my childhood,
    The little Christmas music box represented the child in me,
    The childhood I once had,
    That no longer I could see.




    Submitted on 2005-03-17 20:14:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is really good.. I love the music box theme. I think as we grow older we get a little nostalgic about how good the younger years were, and we wish for them back again. That's what I got out of this. Very well put.
    Now...go and make some new memories so that when you're 30 or so, you can look back and wish you were 16 and having those good times again :)

    Take Care!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-03-18 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellant. It reminded me of my childhood in some ways. The mystique, the innocence and the disappointments. You have a winner here my friend, well done.
    | Posted on 2005-03-17 00:00:00 | by BenCollier | [ Reply to This ]



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