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    dots Submission Name: purple socksdots
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    Author: reveries
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 54/74/23
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I dont know why I named the poem "Purple Socks"...but enjoy


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    I'm sitting on my bed thinking about love......I'm in love.....and I'm dancing...and this feels good......I'm in love with everything and everything feels real real good....

    I feel bad for those who let the little thigns pass you by and for those seeking love....do what I did....fall in love with the humming drums of your school marching band, or the winds that rush through the woods at night....fall in love with a silly song....a stuffed animal.....

    anything.....I'm feelin good right now....like a bird who's just learned a new song




    Submitted on 2005-03-17 22:22:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think that purple socks was a perfect titel, and I think this poem was awesome. I love how you sorta disregard the fact that people think they need a physical person to be in love...you are like, nah! I love this so much.
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      I couldn't have said it better. Your last commentor hit hit the point. I too liked the sense of you talking in this, however it did die at the end. Seemed you had a good idea and a good opening but you coudln't quite figure how to close it. Please do not be dismayed by these comments, this piece has great potential work on it some. I would love to re read when you have done that.
    | Posted on 2005-03-18 00:00:00 | by BenCollier | [ Reply to This ]


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