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    dots Submission Name: Never Good Enoughdots
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    Author: sug90
    ASL Info:    14/F/U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 69/93/34
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 256
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 650



    Description:
       Ok. Me and one of my really good freinds are kind of in a fight. Well, she "might" be (as she says) mad at me but apparently she doesn't have time to explain why she's mad at me. Its funny... I have been with her throught thick and thin and now that I am 2 months away from moving to a different state she no longer has time for me.... typical of her.


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    dotsNever Good Enoughdots
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    Why am I never good enough?
    You never saw the truth.
    Why is it so hard to care
    That all I do is lose?
    These sheets are soaked
    In your friendship
    The one I never really had
    As my time is dwindling
    Both in reality and mind
    And I’m doing all I can
    To forgive these tears I’ve cried
    It could be all my fault –
    For once this time
    I’m weathering your moods
    Just waiting for this storm to clear
    So I can finally
    Be sick of you
    And these playful games of fear
    Just for once could you listen,
    Instead of just hear?




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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree with rick when he says that when it is read it is noticeable that you are very young. Keep trying to expand on your thoughts to bring them into better perspective. You are much too young to have such a vindictive and judgemental outlook on life.
    | Posted on 2005-03-18 00:00:00 | by biwitchin_angel | [ Reply to This ]



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