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    dots Submission Name: So Forget Usdots
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    Author: throughmyvoice
    ASL Info:    19/f/US of A
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 69/113/51
    Words: 325
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 697
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       this is another raw, unedited poem. i'd appreciate any comments for the editing of the final version; anything at all is welcome


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    dotsSo Forget Usdots
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    So forget us
    As lives dwindle and fade, as ghosts of stars in the sky
    While we look for a master, someone to guide
    To love and trust

    While I rage against the world and lose
    And lose myself in the chaos and battle
    As my life begins to whirl, when I begin to ask why
    Im thrown far off the saddle
    Dont remember me

    Forget I am here, crying and screaming
    Empty, scared, lost inside
    Forget that were dying, killing, and being
    What you never wanted us to become
    Instead of holding rosaries, weve gripped hard the gun

    And as blood floods streets and flows as rivers
    As the world starves, and death shivers
    And to be saved, we must all pray for you to deliver
    Deliver us, the forgotten

    Damn you, you non-existent listener
    When I begged and wept, who was it to?
    Obviously not you
    Where the fuck were you when I needed my savior?
    Someone kinder and stronger, purer and braver
    To tell me Im loved because I am

    O humanity, call out to the world
    Save us, save us, or we shall be doomed
    Weeping by rivers full of tears that we know
    Longing for somewhere that we dont know is home

    Never again shall I sing for you, O God
    My lips shall be sealed, no praises shall pour out
    O Divine, where were you to help and to guide?
    We starved for your guidance, your love was a drought

    Jesus! O Jesus, some statue in church
    So that shows to me what my faith is worth?
    A man in pain hanging on a cross
    This is my sacrifice; this is my loss

    To know the truth, my idol is false
    To lose the foundation for all I have known
    And to be laid out naked before mine eyes
    That once looked up for redemption in life





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      okay please ignore any strange comments made by me i swear i have some weird [censor] going on with my computer...thanks for reading...

    -Cherie
    | Posted on 2005-07-05 00:00:00 | by throughmyvoice | [ Reply to This ]
      "And as blood floods streets and flows as rivers
    As the world starves, and death shivers
    And to be saved, we must all pray for you to deliver
    Deliver us, the forgotten"

    I want you to say this line out loud because you, my friend have perfected the art of playing on words and tying the tongue. Beautiful piece and your completely right, our generation is [censored]ed up. Though there is a god if you scream loud enough, he just so happens to work at a mental institution. But seriously, amazing poem.
    | Posted on 2005-06-29 00:00:00 | by azeremen12 | [ Reply to This ]


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