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    dots Submission Name: In Loving Memorydots
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    Author: PookiezBookie
    ASL Info:    16/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    4.4 - 103/129/49
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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       just something that i wrote. my nana passed away this past week. just thoughts.


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    dotsIn Loving Memorydots
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    We may loose those who did not make it through the fight. But after all, we are still here. And should carry on the message that those of whom can no longer spread throughout speech or touch. Life goes on through the ups and the downs, it is only human to want to grieve the death of our loved ones. But we need to stop depressing their deaths and start celebrating the lives that they had. That is only what they would want us to do. Make the message known and embrace what we all have in common, humanity. and love for those we hold closest to our hearts.

    -In Memory Of Nana Rosaria Linda Bosquer




    Submitted on 2005-03-18 18:19:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes real true here. Life goes on. My poem called TO MIC WARRICK is talking about my uncle that died last year and we all miss him and try to move on but's it's hard. Good erite keep it up.
    | Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by jermwerm | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm glad that you are able to write about the emotions that you're feeling. My grandfather died about a year ago, and one of my only consolations was my poetry. Being able to write is a wonderful cure-all. If there's anything I can do...?
    | Posted on 2005-03-20 00:00:00 | by zyllion | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm sorry to hear about your Nana. that must be hard. but i'm glad you felt comfertable enough to post your thoughts! If you need anything I'm here if you need me!
    Hannah
    | Posted on 2005-03-18 00:00:00 | by Devils Angel | [ Reply to This ]


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