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    dots Submission Name: The words that came outdots
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    Author: steph1011
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 34/45/25
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 286
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 547



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    dotsThe words that came outdots
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    I can't believe you said
    you loved me so much
    that you would be my one
    one and only
    the vows you said
    you didn't keep any of them
    now I am down on the ground
    begging for you
    to come back in my arms
    even though you dont love me
    I still love you
    me loving you is enough
    I miss you so much
    the way we cuddle
    I miss you so much
    I just wish some day
    you'll come back in my arms
    and say I love you
    once more




    Submitted on 2005-03-19 17:32:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it you showed your emotions well and is nicely written. I feel what your going through and it's very sad. i like the your work so far and would like to read more.
    | Posted on 2005-03-21 00:00:00 | by sheltie | [ Reply to This ]
      this had a lot emotion it expressed the poem really well ,it seemed like came from the heart. don't change a thing.hope to here from you. keep writing.
    | Posted on 2005-03-20 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this write, I could feel your loss. I'm going through a loss as well, and can relate with what you wrote, The pain doesn't get any easier, we just learn to adapt. sad huh. I hope things get better for you. keep writing, and I'll keep reading. god bless.
    deb
    aka> illusions35904
    | Posted on 2005-03-19 00:00:00 | by illusions35904 | [ Reply to This ]



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