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    dots Submission Name: What You Did I'll Never Forgetdots
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    Author: POETRY
    ASL Info:    17/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 259/141/37
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsWhat You Did I'll Never Forgetdots
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    You called me things I never thought I'd hear you say
    You said things I never thought would ever come from you
    You told me promises you never kept
    It was my love you never chose to ecxept
    I felt abloished from the love we once had
    Because every moment with you was every moment I now linger to have back.
    You took the most precious thing from me....
    My life, my everything, my virginity
    I never thought you could hurt me
    But I guess never say never
    Because you took it from me forever
    I have fallen in love with you
    But now I dont know what to do
    Because now I have been robbed form my own being
    You took everything that had meaning
    I am hurt and dieing inside
    All because you left my bedside...




    Submitted on 2005-03-19 22:13:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh my goodness. This was heartfelt. I loved this one as well. It was very moving, like your boyfriend just taking everything before your very eyes, and all of a sudden its gone. A lot of imagery and drama. Just like Ike and Tina. lol
    Excellent.
    | Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by Fusion | [ Reply to This ]
      You called me things I never thought I'd hear you say
    You said things I never thought would ever come from you
    You told me promises you never kept
    It was my love you never chose to ecxept
    I felt abloished from the love we once had
    Because every moment with you was every moment I now linger to have back

    i know how you feel... good poem. i might add it to my faves
    | Posted on 2005-03-20 00:00:00 | by shattered_dream | [ Reply to This ]



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