dive into the heart
choose your destiny at my hands
if you cared, you might try to stop me.
or maybe you disappear too quickly to catch me.
i'll be waiting
until then
question all that you know
and the fates will provide you
i agree.this is good.though the title doesnt fit with what you wrote.but other than that i did like this.dont change a thing...except maybe the title..totally up to you..good job!
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