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Submission Name: To a friend dots

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Author:	Gothik
ASL Info:	22 / m / Canada
Elite Ratio:	3.36 - 93/132/30
Words:	106

Class/Type:	Poetry/
Total Views:	438
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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I wrote this for my good friend Rain.

To a friend dots

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As the night fall
I can't seem to sleep
I talk to you
And you listen to me

Life take us appart
But we stay together
Whatever the distance
I'll still be there

There to listen to you
There to understand you
There to support you
Whatever life has for you

Even if I never see you
I'll stand beside you
For the better or worst
I'll still be there

I may not be able protect you
Of the life's shadows
And when the rain will fall on you
In the darkness I'll rise

I'll stand beside you
Whatever happen

Submitted on 2005-03-20 20:02:30 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ah yes! i like it! ...sweet, simple, not 2 long or 2 short...very good job on the wording...original...
*likes poem some more*...yup! that's one good poem! now 2 go check out that other one...

CinnamonT
| Posted on 2005-11-05 00:00:00 | by Avril54 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hmm, very sweet. Rain is a very special person. And I hope she realized from this how much you care about her. (How sad, the only people who commented are her close friends) okay well I guess it isn't really that sad, since we get to see how great she is.

*Off to read more *
Bon
| Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by Krazy | [ Reply to This ]
  oh, how cute. this is a very well worded piece and (yes, i know this sounds corny) but you can really tell how sweet it is and how it shines with true feeling.
thank you for writing this to rain, she's such a special person and i don't think she realizes how much she means to people. she's my best friend and i have no idea where i would be without her. again, thank you
-wildchild
| Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by wildchild | [ Reply to This ]
  This was really good and cute. I loved the whole idea of it and I also loved how the whole thing flowed. I hope to read more from you later!
| Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
  Oh, Thank you. This means a lot to me. I don't think I have ever had someone write something for me, thank you. I don't know how to describe how happy this makes me.
I don't know what to say, but this makes me happier than you can ever imagine.

Luv you,
Rain
| Posted on 2005-03-20 00:00:00 | by Rain | [ Reply to This ]

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