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    dots Submission Name: To a frienddots
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    Author: Gothik
    ASL Info:    22 / m / Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 93/132/30
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 438
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    Bytes: 715



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       I wrote this for my good friend Rain.


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    dotsTo a frienddots
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    As the night fall
    I can't seem to sleep
    I talk to you
    And you listen to me

    Life take us appart
    But we stay together
    Whatever the distance
    I'll still be there

    There to listen to you
    There to understand you
    There to support you
    Whatever life has for you

    Even if I never see you
    I'll stand beside you
    For the better or worst
    I'll still be there

    I may not be able protect you
    Of the life's shadows
    And when the rain will fall on you
    In the darkness I'll rise

    I'll stand beside you
    Whatever happen




    Submitted on 2005-03-20 20:02:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ah yes! i like it! ...sweet, simple, not 2 long or 2 short...very good job on the wording...original...
    *likes poem some more*...yup! that's one good poem! now 2 go check out that other one...


    CinnamonT
    | Posted on 2005-11-05 00:00:00 | by Avril54 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm, very sweet. Rain is a very special person. And I hope she realized from this how much you care about her. (How sad, the only people who commented are her close friends) okay well I guess it isn't really that sad, since we get to see how great she is.

    *Off to read more *
    Bon
    | Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by Krazy | [ Reply to This ]
      oh, how cute. this is a very well worded piece and (yes, i know this sounds corny) but you can really tell how sweet it is and how it shines with true feeling.
    thank you for writing this to rain, she's such a special person and i don't think she realizes how much she means to people. she's my best friend and i have no idea where i would be without her. again, thank you
    -wildchild
    | Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by wildchild | [ Reply to This ]
      This was really good and cute. I loved the whole idea of it and I also loved how the whole thing flowed. I hope to read more from you later!
    | Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, Thank you. This means a lot to me. I don't think I have ever had someone write something for me, thank you. I don't know how to describe how happy this makes me.
    I don't know what to say, but this makes me happier than you can ever imagine.

    Luv you,
    Rain
    | Posted on 2005-03-20 00:00:00 | by Rain | [ Reply to This ]



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