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Submission Name: Just friends dots

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Author:	POETRY
ASL Info:	17/f/az
Elite Ratio:	4.29 - 259/141/37
Words:	207

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	483
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Bytes:	1250

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This has happended to my best friend and I thought I should put it out there so hope u like.

Just friends dots

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"How am I suppose to move on when you won't just let me be?"
"I can't let you be because I want you to be with me."
"I am sorry...you should never have tried to make our friendship something more." Monica said to jesus as he looked down.
"And how was I to know that I should take the chance or not? How was I to know that you wouldn't feel the same? hmm?"
"Jesus, I don't know but I do know that you can't keep pushing something when it does not want a push"
"Why?"
"Because it does not work that way."
"Oh, so you know everything now? huh?"
"I never said that its ju-
"No then answer me this...how can you love someone so much you'd give up everything for them, but still won't love you back?"
"Jesus I am sorry I hurt you and I am sorry that it had to end this way...I love you as a friend thats all"
As she slowly opened the door he whispered...
"Monica...I ..have always loved you.....
She shut the door to a guy shes known all her life and all because he let his love for her get in the way of a friendship.

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  "...to jesus Has he..."
please!!!! i'm begging you!!!! cut the tumor off!!!! cut it off!!!! it just dangles there on the front end of that "as." for God's sake it's 1/2 the size of the original word!!!! don't do it for me though!!!! do it for "as!!!!" look at it there crippled and confused. it does not even know what its supposed to be. it knows it says has but then that doesn't make sense with the rest of the sentence. its one of your own for goodness sake!!!! how can you just let it hobble there in pain!!!! PLEASE!!!! just fix the spelling and junk, okay? i really love this poem. period. now could you fix it, please(pouty puppy dog face)?
keep up the good work. and yeah the situation you wrote about really blows. been there and all that. but mine went better than the one in the poem. hope you liked this cuz if you didn't then i'm gonna feel a wee bit silly.
-p.s.- i got that jesus was a mexica-oops- i mean hispanic fellow.

nick
| Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by reluctant_hero | [ Reply to This ]
  I've been in this situation on both sides before, and it really sucks no matter what side of the situation you are on. I think you summed it up real well in the last line.
| Posted on 2006-04-10 00:00:00 | by Kelly17 | [ Reply to This ]
  well I am sorry you got confused but you showed have known it was a boy in the beggining because Jesus is a spanish mexican name and maybe if you were mexican or spoke spanish you would probably understand it better. ok? So sorry.
-Christina
| Posted on 2005-04-27 00:00:00 | by POETRY | [ Reply to This ]
  hmm. it was real confusing. at first i thought you were talking about god. but then it didnt make sense so it had to be a boy. but i didnt know who was saying what. hd to kind of reread alot to figure it out.

Monica said to jesus has he looked down.

okay. now i know your talking to a guy named jesus. but then..

"Jesus, I don't know but I do know that you can't keep pushing something when it does not want a push"

"Jesus I am sorry I hurt you and I am sorry that it had to end this way...I love you as a friend thats all"

confused me. either he is saying jesus as in "wow" or thats you talking but i dont think so because the line before

"Jesus, I don't know but I do know that you can't keep pushing something when it does not want a push"

seems like your the one talking. clues within the statement.

but i enjoyed it. maybe if you fixed it up you know grammer and saying who is who might help. lovely.

-soomie
| Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by poeticblindness | [ Reply to This ]

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