Interesting subject.. It's original, which is good, because that makes it all the more interesting to read.. Your rhyming seems to flow well until the last line of the last stanza.. It feels a little too long, and the words in it don't flow quite as well as the rest of the poem does.. Overall, I like it though.. Original and well thought out..
this is very funny but very true at the same time. and it definitely fits well in the satire category. this was great for me because its something ive thought about before. not dogs in particular but just the way some people spend their money stupidly instead of putting it to good use. as a poem this is very well written their was never an instance of forced rhyme and it flows easily. i think you could change the last line to "Just so they win" it fits better with your meter and helps the poem flow all the way through. i'm actually living in kuwait right now and the government decided to give all kuwaiti nationals 200 dinars (thats about 650 dollars) just for being kuwaiti. and this was just after the tsunami. thats 650 million dollars that could have been donated. some people are just stupid. great job and i think youve brought up an interesting topic.
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