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    dots Submission Name: The Hole in the Grounddots
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    Author: WriterX
    ASL Info:    18/Male/Poland
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 68/126/83
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Misc/Dark
    Total Views: 517
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    Bytes: 783



    Description:
       Spooky... Again I use my faverouite weapon... Imagination. Why do I write so much about monsters and fear? Just in case I will drink more coffee.

    Beware of the Cooky Jar Monster!!!


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    dotsThe Hole in the Grounddots
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    Its dark down there. It seems there is no end. Whatever made this had to be big. With sharp claws and teeth, don't know why. I try to see anything in the darkness. But nothing can be seen.

    I take a stick and stab the darkness. At first nothing happens. But then something pulled me down. A hairy hand tries to take me inside the hole. I scream but no help comes. I start to fall. I hit the ground, nothing is in my sight. The monster was not here. I look up and see the sky. I call for help. No response. Then I sense that something is watching me. I turn around and see only the darkness. Could there be a monster hiding? If yes I hope its not hungry, anyway I am too skinny, thats what my mon tells me. I would not be very tasty. Unless... it likes skinny boys.




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      Very cute, in a strange spooky way.. I like how well it describes any little childs fear of monsters, at least that's what it portrayed for me.. The images are good, and the words are simple, which makes it that much easier to relate to..
    I especially like the last part:
    "Could there be a monster hiding? If yes I hope its not hungry, anyway I am too skinny, thats what my mon tells me. I would not be very tasty. Unless... it likes skinny boys."
    It is a good ending to a good piece..
    | Posted on 2005-03-21 00:00:00 | by Maskannai | [ Reply to This ]


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