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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Rant/Love
    Total Views: 548
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 398



    Description:
       I'm just in a joyous, playful mood and wonderwhy any ever has a convincing enough arguement not to run mind free like a child...Love, Peace, Joy!!!

    "It Was The Time Of The Preacher" Alice In Chains with legendary Johnny Cash


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    dotsTotal?dots
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    Within "IZ"
    All
    Seemingly intangible
    Real
    Think X
    Feel
    Partnership X
    Deal
    Wondz do
    Heal
    Don't let mind
    Kill
    Conquer that
    Hill
    Smoke X
    Pill
    Anti-keybored
    Quill
    Shush NOW
    B
    still.......; > }




    Submitted on 2005-03-22 00:04:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmmm I think I like it. *I Think i like it, so what am I so afraid of?* lol. Sorry. Anyway, It's really good, pretty unique. Keep up the great writing!
    | Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by painofthanatos | [ Reply to This ]
      Brilliant in the minds...HOw X plAnE It You Do WeLl Now I sound like Yoda...
    Young warrior...jedi knight you are not. Just one of the lines I remember.
    | Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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