I was really touched by this poem. Your words were well expressed. God is indeed patient and loving. Something we could all learn from ourselves. Very well written. Inspiring and thought provoking. Thanks for sharing your faith with all of us here at Elite. I'm only a beginner in poetry writing, so I won't attempt any critque, though it seems none is needed .
Many are called, but few are chosen. This indeed is a well written poem, in meaning as well as in form. You've done a nice job here without being preachy. Something for us all to think about in preparation of Easter. Carol
I liked this one. God is just too much at times for most people to understand...especially the loving and patient part. In todays world of "give me, give me...now"...true love which He gives to us, his children, has been corrupted through its many interpretations that we have created. Very well done...
As a Christian I review this poem and find it scriptiually sound and you approved! Fantastically executed even in the "wordly sense". My spirit was ministered to by this poetic truths. This poem has a annointed touch. " One special guest is My desire.” means you me and all who choose! Bravo!