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Loner


Author: WindEmpress
ASL Info:    15/f/meditating
Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 95 /124 /44
Words: 57
Class/Type: Poetry /Being a Teen
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I hate it when people always ask me why I'm so quiet. This is why, because I'm a loner and I like it that way.


Loner



Seclusion . . .
Loner . . .
Whatever you want to call it
I live without a soul
No one around for miles
No one to care for my woes
No one to listen to my sorrows
Oddly enough
This is my vision of life
I cherish every silent moment
Secluded Loner
That's who I am




Submitted on 2005-03-22 14:49:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Well, there is certainly nothing wrong with being a loner. Most people say it like it's a bad thing, but I disagree.
I like the way you describe it.
You have a lot of talent.
Very nicely done

-nikkki
| Posted on 2006-02-11 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
  I agree with misery.If you have some friends or just someone to talk to,I think loner is just a word that people make up to make others feel bad.Don't take it so hard, and, if its not about you, you made a great piece that many can relate to.
| Posted on 2006-02-04 00:00:00 | by giver_of_death | [ Reply to This ]
  At least if your alone you have solitude. Saying you live without a soul makes it sound sad though. It sounds contadictory to the line about how you cherish every moment of it :)
| Posted on 2005-03-23 00:00:00 | by kanu | [ Reply to This ]
  aaah...so nice. I can relate to this one. People are always so annoying when it comes to quiet people or "loners". don't people ever stop to think that maybe the loners like being alone? great poem.
| Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by darkness child | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked the feeling put behind the poem it made me really feel that you were alone. I really liked the line about the cherishing your silent moments because it tells me you have accepted it and you live with it.
| Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by trenthippie | [ Reply to This ]
  Aww, nifty poem. You're a loner there?! Heads will roll! Heh, sorry. If it's any consolation (Even though you embrace the loner thing, which I completely respect!) we love you here! I don't think I'd call myself a loner. If I don't have friends in a certain class then by all means, I am a complete and total loner. I don't need to tell you that though, you know me quite well. I liked this poem, it rocked, personally. They don't see you in your comfort zones; you aren't quiet then! (not that we mind or anything) The only reason you are quiet, is because you have nothing to say that their tiny minds would comprehend and you don't want to waste your precious breath on them. Much luvs to you, tomodachi. ~SirensSong~
| Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by SirensSong | [ Reply to This ]
  Yeah, I feel that way too sometimes. My family is filled with asswipes, so maybe you can see why. I love my poems nice and short too, so I think I have a new favorite.
-Trouble
PS- cool picture
| Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by Death of Death | [ Reply to This ]
  I feel the same way at my school its ok tho as long as you have something to live for everything will fall into place and your not a loner i don't think there is such a thing its just that your diffrent and people are scared of what they don't know i really liked the poem great job
| Posted on 2005-03-25 00:00:00 | by morbid_misery | [ Reply to This ]


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