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    dots Submission Name: i swear its rightdots
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    Author: monophobic
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere,someplace
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 70/88/32
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 309
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    dotsi swear its rightdots
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    you're the one
    but this isn't working
    you're out of your mind
    but i'm falling behind
    turn back and wait
    we might still have a chance
    things have to change
    but already it's not the same
    what are fighting for
    aren't we in love?
    what is love?
    this cant' be it
    you're the one
    so why isn't this right?




    Submitted on 2005-03-22 21:33:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      yap this is what happens when i guess u get so used to someone.either she/ is too much a friend and doesnt come out of him or herself.
    It raises a multitude of questions
    soome times u just have to get guts and say them in form of a confession coz know what a healthy relationship stands on it blood life good communication and being transparent.
    I also think that u must employ some art when
    lovin' someone coz when you take all you*heavy* love ;some people are not ready for it at the same time so, unleash your skils one at a time.
    | Posted on 2005-03-23 00:00:00 | by kittycampbel | [ Reply to This ]
      *sigh* this sounds like what i have just been going through. it's hard to not know what you should do next,asking questions that no one knows to.only time can tell.
    | Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by dreamer | [ Reply to This ]
      doubts in things are so common in relationships you just want every relation sjip to work out right but we all know that is impossible for if that happend everyone would marry there first bf/gf just rambling on don't mind me its a great right
    | Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by Lucy L. | [ Reply to This ]



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