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    dots Submission Name: Worldz within Wordzdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 728
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 350



    Description:
       This is actually two poems in 1 - I read down starting with Freedom and it's a separate poem within a poem...It presents itself much more freely in written form and is accompanied by a PEACE of celestial art ; > }
    LOVE< PEACE>JOY!!!


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    dotsWorldz within Wordzdots
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    Freedom my precious
    IS
    Never a door
    Locked
    In Truth society ix
    Mocked
    Play as a child
    &
    BE
    Feel GOD within
    &
    See
    BE alive soul
    your
    DREAMZ
    BE beauty as
    "IT" seems....




    Submitted on 2005-03-22 21:58:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A direct message to my soul was it? provoked thoughts in me. Did you mean "is" instead of ix or were you meaning the number? Subliminal messages in caps was there? Liked it it was good thanks
    Kate
    | Posted on 2005-04-06 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      Yo I've got to tell you
    that I find this highly beautiful.
    You the definitive poet in training.
    I dig this brand of poetic waxin
    and I ask you to continue to astound us with your talent.

    Wynne
    | Posted on 2005-03-30 00:00:00 | by Wynne Devereaux | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the lines, "Freedom IS Never Locked" and "Play & BE Feel & See". Your poem within a poem is very neatly and subtly done. Good job.
    | Posted on 2005-03-23 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      interesting...a puzzle where the answer is placed and we are dared to find the riddle....I was especially tickled by: "BE beauty as"IT" seems...."
    You seem to follow the hypocracies of perception well.
    | Posted on 2005-03-23 00:00:00 | by grigori | [ Reply to This ]


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