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    dots Submission Name: Monetdots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Through my half-closed eyes
    and thought-drunk mind
    the swamp took on the beauty
    of a Monet masterpiece.

    Submitted on 2004-04-01 09:44:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's mostly about sensitivity of people... I like the art-work of this impressionist cause it's so transient... but it doesn't mean I don't have some associations... it all depends on personal interpretation. Nice one.
    | Posted on 2004-04-06 00:00:00 | by Nightraven | [ Reply to This ]
      One thing I like to think that i can do well, is see beauty where usually others see ugliness, or waste... it is comforting to know that there are others about who take the time to view the world as such.
    | Posted on 2004-04-05 00:00:00 | by Transcendancing | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked the poem. it was creative and very thoughtful. i also enjoyed the comparison b/w the swamp and one of monet's pieces of art. i also love the impressionist period in art. excellent write...
    | Posted on 2004-04-02 00:00:00 | by colagirl | [ Reply to This ]
      good piece, as in a monet it looks good from far away, but up close its all cluttered and messy, good word usage too!
    | Posted on 2004-04-01 00:00:00 | by gigglygirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Wonderful minimalist piece again Amy, Monet has been on my mind these past few weeks as I await the first spring flowers--I too like they way they look from afar with squinted eyes or blurred through a rain teared window---it's just another way of connecting beyond the obvious---Thanks, silver
    | Posted on 2004-04-01 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      wow! 'thought-drunk mind' wow!

    (sorry cuddle! i probably make a textbook case for Jimmy's 'bad comments'... but i just can't help it.

    really cool this one.
    | Posted on 2004-04-01 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey! I like this. Really original. I love Monet.....Yep, kinda distracted with a busy mind, eyes squinched, can see the beauty in anything.
    | Posted on 2004-04-01 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]

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