mt fav line is "but i kept all the peices to tape up my dreams" it made me think of when i think at somei have things together and then it all comes smashing down and i still want it to be okay.also it reminds me of the manipulatons people can play.
hey this was a powerful poem and it seems that you pourd so much emotion into it!this poem seems like you were played by some one you loved and it hurt you really bad. i think that it is nice that not only gurls can pour there little hearts out and write poems that are strong and emotional but boys can to so if you ever wanna talk look me up gothic_witch
wow, this was an excellent peice i really mean it. this will make an awesome song. i like how you ended it with the "(nothing but a tragedy)" that was really great. i really dont know what else to say about this peice except again that it is really awesome! great job. :)