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All your promises you couldn't keep but i kept all the peices to tape up my dreams and how far did i have to come before you knew how to play me and how far did you want me to bleed, until i could not be? And i know i can't believe when ya say that you won't burn my world down again but i still keep all the ashes to hide away my tragedy and how far did i have to come before you knew how to play me and how far did you want me to bleed, until i could not be? Now I can't control my emotions or the way you make me feel and with you i can only see i came this far for nothing (nothing but forever suffering) And I don't know how to change when you still bring me pain and I can't help but feel like you still fail to be true when you've shadowed our love grey (when your promises break away) Now I can't control my future or my memories but you still make me feel like i came this far for nothing yeah you still make me feel like i came this far for nothing (nothing but a tragedy) |
mt fav line is "but i kept all the peices to tape up my dreams" it made me think of when i think at somei have things together and then it all comes smashing down and i still want it to be okay.also it reminds me of the manipulatons people can play. | Posted on 2005-04-29 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ] | WOAH! I think I might add this to my favorites! This is a good write...you put all your emotion into this poem and thats just incredible | | Posted on 2005-03-24 00:00:00 | by demonickitten87 | [ Reply to This ] | hey this was a powerful poem and it seems that you pourd so much emotion into it!this poem seems like you were played by some one you loved and it hurt you really bad. i think that it is nice that not only gurls can pour there little hearts out and write poems that are strong and emotional but boys can to | so if you ever wanna talk look me up gothic_witch | Posted on 2005-03-24 00:00:00 | by gothic_witch | [ Reply to This ] | wow, this was an excellent peice i really mean it. this will make an awesome song. i like how you ended it with the "(nothing but a tragedy)" that was really great. i really dont know what else to say about this peice except again that it is really awesome! great job. :) | | Posted on 2005-03-23 00:00:00 | by _Joeysgirl_ | [ Reply to This ] | |