Description: It's something i feel right now... it's about my pain and suffering i still feel since rachel hurt me.........
Came this far for nothing -------------------------------------------
All your promises
you couldn't keep
but i kept all the peices
to tape up my dreams
and how far did i have to come
before you knew how to play me
and how far did you want me to bleed,
until i could not be?
And i know i can't believe
when ya say that you
won't burn my world down again
but i still keep all the ashes
to hide away my tragedy
and how far did i have to come
before you knew how to play me
and how far did you want me to bleed,
until i could not be?
Now I can't control
my emotions or
the way you make me feel
and with you i can only see
i came this far for nothing
(nothing but forever suffering)
And I don't know how to change
when you still bring me pain
and I can't help but feel like
you still fail to be true when
you've shadowed our love grey
(when your promises break away)
Now I can't control
my future or
my memories
but you still make me feel
like i came this far for nothing
yeah you still make me feel
like i came this far for nothing
(nothing but a tragedy)
mt fav line is "but i kept all the peices to tape up my dreams" it made me think of when i think at somei have things together and then it all comes smashing down and i still want it to be okay.also it reminds me of the manipulatons people can play.
hey this was a powerful poem and it seems that you pourd so much emotion into it!this poem seems like you were played by some one you loved and it hurt you really bad. i think that it is nice that not only gurls can pour there little hearts out and write poems that are strong and emotional but boys can to so if you ever wanna talk look me up gothic_witch
wow, this was an excellent peice i really mean it. this will make an awesome song. i like how you ended it with the "(nothing but a tragedy)" that was really great. i really dont know what else to say about this peice except again that it is really awesome! great job. :)
Submission Name: Came this far for nothing
