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    dots Submission Name: Move Ondots
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    Author: Bang
    ASL Info:    29/F/Philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 20/16/6
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 299
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       There was a times in our life, that we feel its the end of our rope and need to give up life that way we never feel anymore the bitterness of life.


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    Rainy days come, sunny days go,
    and life is never being the same.
    There are days when we have to catch our breaths,
    and there are times when we can take it easy.

    The road we take does not follow a straight line,
    always there are zig and zags.
    There are times we go off the main road,
    with delude diversion that lead us to astray.

    But even in the depths of sadness, don’t lose hope.
    Providence always extends a helping hand.
    Take a wing and fly,
    life that is really a constant flux.

    Just hang on and should not give up.
    We need to keep up the fight!




    Submitted on 2005-03-23 09:26:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was very good. You showed your emotions very well. This poem has a great meaning alot of poeple should realate to this and agree and move on.hope to here from you. Keep writing.
    | Posted on 2005-03-23 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]



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