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    dots Submission Name: Precious Timedots
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    Author: Bang
    ASL Info:    29/F/Philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 20/16/6
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Misc/
    Total Views: 251
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    Bytes: 446



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       Go on with your dreams untill your young.


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    dotsPrecious Timedots
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    My imagination was occasionally crazy,
    flying off elsewhere.
    Wishing and doing something else,
    Even dreaming to be somebody else.

    Wasting my time,
    letting my imagination fly nowhere
    Romanticize and fantasize
    Even looking over the fence to admire.

    Time passes inexorably,
    and realize...
    Never take advantage
    the very precious time I may have.




    Submitted on 2005-03-23 10:02:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree great short piece that I definitely can relate to. Love how talking about daydreaming and stuff shows that we should not sit back and waste time but act and enjoy life.
    | Posted on 2005-03-23 00:00:00 | by bkj43 | [ Reply to This ]
      This was great. For such a short poem you got your pont across very well.people will realte to this piece, don't change a thing. Hope to here from you.
    | Posted on 2005-03-23 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]



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