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    dots Submission Name: Elevatedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 962
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    Description:
       George Harrison song - sketch of a turtle walking through the desert the world upon His back - a cloudy Colorado day.....


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    dotsElevatedots
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    Subconcious you are calling through the radio
    George's words a spark of Light
    illuminate my soul
    2 break of day
    2 fall of night
    Subconcious please call louder
    the music gone 2 loud
    It woke up sleeping Buddha
    float like mushroom cloud
    I didn't go to college but my life "It" iz my work
    find the song 2
    elevate
    eternity
    you await




    Submitted on 2004-04-01 11:14:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you are quite unique aren't you. george kicks ass, and you have diverse ways of presenting your words through the means you choose. unlike others i've seen thus far
    | Posted on 2006-03-22 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      This is pretty cool, I my favorite part is, "It woke the sleeping Buddha, float like mushroom cloud" that cool! Great Job!
    | Posted on 2004-04-01 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really interesting. I love the bit about trying to get your subconscious to "call louder."
    | Posted on 2004-04-01 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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