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    dots Submission Name: Revelationdots
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    Author: Bang
    ASL Info:    29/F/Philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 20/16/6
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
    Total Views: 238
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 684



    Description:
       No way. Just invented what a man should be and what a woman wanted to be.


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    dotsRevelationdots
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    He was smart and flexible
    he means well, think well and act well.
    His few, simple, sincere, well chosen words,
    his caring touch and gentle smile,
    His convincing message that really count on for support and encouragement.
    His full attention to me, with mind and heart.
    And making those moments more memorable with a full sense of humor.
    He teaches me to be strong and brave at any given time.
    .... A high profile person
    .... The big bang, the big banner headlines…
    .... the big talk and the big organization
    that mark their inauguration

    A truth reveals...
    My Charming Prince...?




    Submitted on 2005-03-23 19:51:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i believe this is really a good piece 1 thing is you are more like me you are kind of a realist. u just need to realise it people will have you wait on u to hear what more else you have to tell them. i guess you need some more energy in what you're doing and guess what better results await. Good times from "the best is yet to be" c u then
    | Posted on 2005-04-16 00:00:00 | by kittycampbel | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought it was good...i thought it was rather interesting how you fit it together...but like i said an overall good piece
    | Posted on 2005-03-24 00:00:00 | by schemingdevil22 | [ Reply to This ]
      This was ok, not really to my tast but everyone likes diffrent things. I think it was kinda intresting how the last part of this played out. It was really good just becuse of that (I thought)
    | Posted on 2005-03-23 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]



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