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    dots Submission Name: Seems W/O Tenderness Theredots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 1
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSeems W/O Tenderness Theredots
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    Submitted on 2005-03-24 00:17:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Epiphany you are driving me crazy lol! I see nothing absoultely nothing and I know you are telling me someting here with nothing. So give this virgin poet a clue on what goes on with your style of poetry!
    | Posted on 2005-03-24 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      This is brilliant. I havent seen anything that expresses everything like a blank canvas does...because it is the pallete of creativity. And the title fits because most people see a blank canvas as something without emotion until they realize they have to put the emotion there. Very well done. Not many people would have the guts to express themselves in this fashion. Or maybe you didnt have enough curry in your diet...hee-hee
    | Posted on 2005-03-24 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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