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    dots Submission Name: Tendernessdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 617
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 232



    Description:
       I sat by the pond at dark and traNSCENDED 2 PURPLE LIGHT. I listened to GENERAL PUBLIC SING "TENDERNESS" & I SENT :MY SMILE : > } OUT 2 A:: :ands...LOVE>LIVE?PEACE>JOY
    Great everything 2 all...Epiphany "Tiff" ; > }


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    dotsTendernessdots
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    A SMILE TRAN-SENDS
    time
    2
    BLESS
    the UN-knOWN
    tHEy SEE "IT"
    rhyme
    1
    Guess
    or NO "IT"
    thyme...
    NOT really
    4
    TIME///




    Submitted on 2005-03-24 00:30:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      A smile is like a ray of sunshine; it brightens everything it reaches!!
    | Posted on 2011-06-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I too have read acfew of your pieces ,however this message about a Smile blessing some Un-known is well trancended. Too often a smile might make all the difference in how a day might be looked upon, and it is with held!
    I have always wondered 'why' when we see some one in a wheel chair or another disabling condition we look away, when just a smile and eyecontact is powerful enough to touch thier hearts!
    Well done and be the voice of Epiphany!
    | Posted on 2005-03-24 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      Okay I dare to comment lol. I am not familar with your writing style and in the past have read your works but refrained from responding sometimes cause I didn't understand it and at others afraid I would show my ignorance in this type of execution of verse. This piece I understood and enjoyed and I will continue to read your work and hopefully my mind will grasp what you are doing or maybe you won't mind giving me a poetry lesson on this style?
    ~always with love Cheryl~
    | Posted on 2005-03-24 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      "A time to bless the unknown" I like that line. Transcending...it becomes and it is always what you see...even through time. Thats just me rambling about how this write makes me feel...
    Have a good one.
    | Posted on 2005-03-24 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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