I liked the title, because JC is less human than divine. Good job on all the crucifixion symbols woven in,
-I especially liked the last, about his betrayal. "a pain prevails and permeates the earthly flesh i know deny us thrice...i am alone. It fades away like light when darkness overtakes so that seemed perfect to me,
Is this suppose to be a religouse poem? It seems a lot like one but at the same time it could not be. I'm going to go with the latter becuse I usally hae religouse poems just becuse (yes, I'm mean and nasty) Good job, the whole thing flowed pretty good and it was intresting.