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Author:	Wynne Devereaux
ASL Info:	23 yrs.old/M/Texas
Elite Ratio:	2.73 - 152/211/53
Words:	288

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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This is an ode to loving myself and being blessed with who I am. I hope you all can appreciate it!

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'Beautifully Human'
Birthed: 24/03/05
Scribed: PropheticNsyght 'Vuduu Chylde' (G.S.B, Gentleman Sings the Blues)

Beautifully Human,
form etched in gold...
refined seven times seven in flames.
cleansed and purified daily...
A masterpiece in progress.
My soul,
wrought from HIS
His breath flows through me...
His thoughts move in me...
His love consumes me...
Perfect?
Nah,
just basking and living in
perfect peace.
Resigned to the idea that in this
life, I will sometimes fall.
Comfortable with my shortcomings and weaknesses.
Wise enough to realize that I am strong and
will not stay down long.
He infuses me...
My definition is found in him...
he is my identity.
Beautifully Human,
the birth of knowledge enough to
know that despite all the sun...
sometimes there is rain.
For every dry, desert-like landscape,
there is a hidden oasis.
Beautifully Human.
Knowledge that there is good and evil,
tears and joy,
pain and pleasure
and each comes in a specific, ordained measure.
Beautifully Human,
means I'm free to exist as I want.
I'm at liberty to breath and soak in individuality...
I am He and He is Me.
Free to create,
Free to destroy.
Free to be straightforward or
free to toy.
Freedom...freedom...and more freedom.
My thoughts, ideas, impressions, passions and reactions
are my own.
Beautifully Human to the bone.
From the dust of the earth,
to the clouds of the sky...
God's peculiar and wonderfully made creation,
there is no price and you can't buy.
Each part of my form and spirit,
carefully labored over before the beginning of time...
I'm Beautifully Human;
living, breathing and doing things to my
own distinct rhythm and rhyme.

'Gentleman Sings the Blues' / 2005

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  I really like this peice. You draw in the reader very well and hold onto the intention. Peace is such a hard place to reach and you create the hope of such very well. You choose a diffucult topic for some to write about and the faith within this peice is very strong. The only thing that bothers me about this peice is the repetition. At times it seems very out of place or overdone. You make such strong relations to life, but life is not as constant as this. I guess I'm probably looking at it too concrete and abstact though.
Good write, thanks for the read.
| Posted on 2005-04-30 00:00:00 | by ConScribe | [ Reply to This ]
  Your self portrait is painted beautifully. It is a wonderful gift that someone could believe so strongly in their humanity, flaws and all. I wish my thoughts would come out so clearly in writing. Keep up the GREAT work.

I kneel before your humane supremacy.

~Trinity~
| Posted on 2005-03-30 00:00:00 | by Trinity | [ Reply to This ]
  You have a great grip on who you are as a person and what you were made to be: i love your expression "beautifully Human" too many people miss the beauty that we are, despite our shortcomings: Your rhyming was loose and unrigid as was the structure which flowed the poem along smoothly, which fit the message you were presenting beautifully, Thankyou very much for the read, this has to be one of my favourites...Dave
| Posted on 2005-03-25 00:00:00 | by littlecoombs | [ Reply to This ]
  This is amazing. You've done a wonderful job here. Spirtuality is something I have found very hard to write about, but you sir, I bow before your skills.
Everything about this piece is incredible and there isn't really anything more I can say. The rhythem and the flow were perfect, just keeping time with one another.
Wonderful Job!

Rain
| Posted on 2005-03-25 00:00:00 | by Rain | [ Reply to This ]
  It's a beautiful, it's amazing that you've found the strength to love, accept and appreciate everything you are.
It's isn't easy in that journey. I admire the fact that you've found that peace.
And am somewhat envious...I'm not sure I'll ever reach that place.
Thank you for the hope and insight.
Great piece.
Jaymi
| Posted on 2005-03-25 00:00:00 | by theDevilsPocket | [ Reply to This ]
  It's awesome that you are so content with who you are, flaws, virtues and all. Not many people can feel this way. Way to go. ^.^
| Posted on 2005-03-25 00:00:00 | by AngeloftheVoid | [ Reply to This ]

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