Dont push me away
If you turly love me
You must open your eyes
And let yourself see
That it's not so bad
Being happy with me
A love so ture
With very little strength
Are you willing to end
What could be so great
I like this write and i think that its TRULY RAW EMOTION it is short but it is still really good and yes it does get your point across and i think its great
I like what you have to say. Intense but short. Some pple say that short poems don't get the point across well enough but if you have said all you need to say then end it. I can not relate honestly, but I still think its a deep emotion from the heart. Thats all that really matters anyways.
this is a good straight forward write. you get your point across quickly but you are not breif emotionally. i can feel how deep you feel in this write. its good
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