Description: LOL, its a song i wrote when i was stuck listenin to coutry with _Joeysgirl_ and i was pissed and everything was down...so about yeah, its somethin kinda about _Joeysgirl_, but its also about fake musicians.....enjoi
"All the secrets in your words, they make me sick and it makes me sick how you can bring back the memories i hate."
I love that. You have a fan-f*cking-tastic amount of talent. The whole thing is wonderful. I especially like how you don't drift from the meaning just to try to make it rhyme. (I noticed a lot of people do that, so I figured I'd point it out.) I have nothing negative to say.
hmmm...not quite sure what to say about this one (especially since it is about me lol, but thats all good). for some reason im not too fond of the last two lines of the chorus, it just doesnt seem to flow too well to me, but thats just me im not a musician so i really dont know what im talkin bout lol. i liked the last stanza. it had a lot of feeling in it (but i would like to know what i could do to make any of this better). but yeah good write. :)
This was aawesome.Prolly one of my favorites that you have ever did...did I tell you I talked to Justin Hill? He was actually bein kinda nice.But whatever cause it never lasts he always ends up [censored]in me out.