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    dots Submission Name: crush-proofdots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotscrush-proofdots
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    the sun tears at the cellophane night
    and unwraps the next habitual day.
    i am crush-proof no longer.
    each breath the day takes,
    draws the life from my soul,
    one drag at a time.
    then released, expelled
    and tarry in wisps of hopes and dreams
    that vanish into nothing.
    all words and thoughts put out
    into the ashes of the day,
    the sweet thick smell of life replaced
    the residue of stink and stain
    are all that remain...
    when all i am is gone




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