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    dots Submission Name: Callingdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    dotsCallingdots
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    Never to doubt
    that God
    is near
    Call His name
    release
    all fear
    Let Love voice
    whisper
    in your ear
    For all who
    call
    he doth hear




    Submitted on 2004-04-01 15:52:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      huh, you seem to like to keep them short, don't you. they all have an intertwining element to them, or so i've noticed that it seems that way to me. keep it up, someones gotta write the other side of tracks.
    | Posted on 2006-03-15 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a great poem with power in the 12 lines. its such a simple concept but some still need to hear it every now and then.
    | Posted on 2004-04-01 00:00:00 | by mavrrick | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice religouse poem...Keep that faith of yours, some of us would be lost without believing in him
    | Posted on 2004-04-01 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]


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