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    dots Submission Name: Ode to Vincent VanGoghdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsOde to Vincent VanGoghdots

    Of me and out of me
    yet, humanity often
    and I am left dazed and
    So I fight
    While I instinctively feel Love
    Does conquer all

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      Your Ode takes me again to the Van Gogh museum which I visited several times when I lived in Amsterdam for two years. I would like to go again some day. His work is amazing. He indeed brought me light through the seeming daze of his art. You give him a fitting tribute.
    | Posted on 2011-08-02 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      shnap! this is tight. i love the play on words and organization you chose for this format. an exellent deliverence and masterfully versed. I feel this one, and though it is simple, the meaning is far beyond. HOpe you enjoy my next piece as much as i enjoyed this.
    | Posted on 2006-03-17 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      He was such a shy, fragile and vulnerable man - as genius's usually are. I detect in your words - real admiration for him.
    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      i agree with the "dazed and confused" part, but that's okay! it's still a good write! i sent stuff to poetry.com, too. i just received an award in the mail from them. they want to publish my poem in a book, but they want money!!! yeah, right! you should pay me!! welcome, epiphany!
    | Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      This is pretty good, but the phrase "dazed and confused" sounds so Led Zepplin. I'd change that bit.
    | Posted on 2004-04-01 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]

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