Strong jaw and
deep eyes that promise
everything but by themselves
deliver nothing
resting beneth a
slavic brow and smooth
defined cheekbones
on which women hang
neck curving gracefully into
slender shoulders
strong arms and stomach
not david
but not bad
If I were a woman
I'd well...
smooth body
quick mind
enthralled gazing into a
smooth pool of silver
wondering
why nobody else
writes poetry
about me
I really loved this, I sometimes write about myself because sometimes I am my own favorite subject. I can't offer anything to help improve it. It's already wonderful.
"Come let us paint a picture said the artist to the poet... and together they worked and slaved to the cruel tormentors known as the inspirative muses..."
I loved this, piece by piece it builds a portrait, piece by piece it comes together like fingertips searching, exploring, or eyes wandering slowly over the subject, drawing them into the silken essence of shared sensuality... it made me want to reach out and touch him, and respond in kind... but the best compliment I can give: It is so sensual that my mind and body ache, in the most pleasant of ways. There are so few whom delve and indulge in exploring such a subtle and delicate concept, but you have truly outdone yourself, and for this moment, and the next few, I am completely overwhelmed. *purrrrrrrrr*
Submission Name: Narcissus
