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    dots Submission Name: Something About Nothingdots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 732
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       This is this and I think that I will try and write more to it later.

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    dotsSomething About Nothingdots

    This is something about nothing
    but subject is bound to get in my way
    I know you know that I am here
    but I ignore all the pain

    this is something about nothing
    I am afraid that you'll see right through
    my disguise, my comprimise,
    this poem is really about you

    Submitted on 2005-03-26 16:49:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really would like to read the rest of this poem. it seems as tho it would be a favorite of mine. i can tell its about something but at the same time its about nothing. tell me when it is done. i would love to read it. so far its really good. keep writing. cherrypie
    | Posted on 2005-03-26 00:00:00 | by cherrypie | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good. I like it a lot. I got a feeling that I know who it's about though. I'm not going to say who. No seriously this is really good. Will you read my newest poem that I submitted and let me know what you think about it? Be honest too. I kind of thought I needed to change up my style of writing every now and then. This was my first change. I hope you like it.
    | Posted on 2005-03-26 00:00:00 | by manda_bear | [ Reply to This ]
      well!well!this isn't really about nothing after all.it is a pained revelation about something that is seriously affecting you.can there be anything more said?you will certainly get some strange comments about this one but that will make it even less about nothing which should make you see things in a different light.good luck and fare well. SoNNy
    | Posted on 2005-03-26 00:00:00 | by sickly | [ Reply to This ]

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