i really would like to read the rest of this poem. it seems as tho it would be a favorite of mine. i can tell its about something but at the same time its about nothing. tell me when it is done. i would love to read it. so far its really good. keep writing. cherrypie
This is really good. I like it a lot. I got a feeling that I know who it's about though. I'm not going to say who. No seriously this is really good. Will you read my newest poem that I submitted and let me know what you think about it? Be honest too. I kind of thought I needed to change up my style of writing every now and then. This was my first change. I hope you like it.
well!well!this isn't really about nothing after all.it is a pained revelation about something that is seriously affecting you.can there be anything more said?you will certainly get some strange comments about this one but that will make it even less about nothing which should make you see things in a different light.good luck and fare well. SoNNy