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    dots Submission Name: I believeddots
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    Author: steph1011
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 34/45/25
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 230
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 548



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       Don't judge on punctuation.. I am terrible at that.. Please give me advise..


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    dotsI believeddots
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    Every word that spoke fluently
    all the lines that you said ..
    more like you memorized,
    I fell for every word
    I believe all the words
    the words that were soft and truthful
    the words that ended up being just a lie
    When I think about it
    It doesnt seem possible
    you were honest and with a straight face
    but why did you act that way
    why didnt you just tell me the truth
    Instead of you telling me
    you loved me
    and than run away
    with another girl....




    Submitted on 2005-03-27 10:16:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was good i mean it seemed like you rushed to finish it. Other than that it was good you showed your emotions very well in this poem.Try to add more to it.hope to hear from you.
    | Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by theman | [ Reply to This ]



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