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    dots Submission Name: This "Idealistic" Placedots
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    Author: Star_searcher
    ASL Info:    17/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 114/109/20
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Misc/Mirror or Mask
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    Sometimes I just want to be alone in this world.

    Free.
    Free to do as I choose, I'll set my own rules.
    So many people are vain, they can't see what's right infront of them, what really matters in this life.
    Why are people so materialistic? What about love, compassion, friendship?
    Should that be ruled out by this social idealism that has been created by society?
    You tell me.

    Why do people believe they have the right to interfere?
    Why donít they know when to keep the hell out of things?

    We live in a society with narrow minded people with mediocre lives.
    Believing that we should all be stick thin, look perfect all the time, act in a certain way and follow the social norms.

    Well bollocks to the social norms!
    I want to be different, why should I have to fit in.
    Thatís not me, Iím me, not everyone else.
    How could I possibly express ME trying to be something that Iím not.
    I want to break the cycle, not care.
    But every time I try I find myself in the same place .....
    A place of idealism perspective that has been created.
    I just want to create a different place .....




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      Yeah, thats why I just try to speak with honesty because thats something that seems to be lacking in society...but I am just too narrow minded, or so I've been told, HA! (inside joke...sorry)

    I liked this and the questions you ask are valid. I mean, if such and such supermodel is so friggin hot and good looking...why do they still airbrush her in her layout in some magazine? Heck I dont care if Carmen Electra has some birthmark on her inner thigh! I'd still be her friend, lover, pal...whatever...as long as she was a decent individual, ya know? Anyway, just rambling now. Have a good one and keep being you!
    | Posted on 2005-09-01 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Bravo! I'm not normally impressed by pieces like this, that are so personal and just a rant, but your words compelled me to read on, and I was drawn into your world, and I agreed with you!
    And I AM impressed!

    "Well bollocks to the social norms!
    I want to be different, why should I have to fit in.
    Thatís not me, Iím me, not everyone else.
    How could I possibly express ME trying to be something that Iím not.
    I want to break the cycle, not care."

    My sentiments, exactly!

    Very very well written, well done!
    Be Happy
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-04-22 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      i sense some hate that controlls pain in this. But you should just be you in whatever place you end up .
    but just imagine if there really was no rules...
    we'd be animals

    peace
    mandy
    | Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by mandy dupuis | [ Reply to This ]


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