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    dots Submission Name: HE'S*HERdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 624
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    Bytes: 154

       "Velvet is rich, caressing, its depths are mysterious, obscure. The stroke loses iteself, not a sign of "IT" visible...So also the shadows in hair." Artist Robert Henri, "tHE art SpIrIT"
    Rock on, rock on, my brothers and sisters in poetic landscape justice...reality iz not what they claim but the BEAUTY in what can BE SEEN...LOVE"PESE"JOI"

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    HE'z tHER
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    compLIEcated (society)

    Submitted on 2005-03-27 17:16:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      As usual a treat to be tasted Tiffany this style of abstract poetry takes time to acquire gladly I can say I am slowly arriving. "compLIEcated (society..." I read, society lies... Love the usage of "IT" ...`always poetry, Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-04-06 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      I have been reading a lot of poems with no obvious meaning and, after much persistence (and help), have managed to figure out what was behind it all. Maybe this is one of those types of poems. Interesting, intriguing. Nonetheless puzzling. Or perhaps it is just an expression of yourself at that moment. Whichever it was, I'm curious to make some sense of it (even if there is none).
    | Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by silverdrika | [ Reply to This ]
      Uh, well. I tend to agree with Mandy here. Even your description is too abstract to comprehend. If this is a purposeful attempt at abstraction, umm... I still don't get it. The purpose of language is twofold: to communicate, and to woo women. I can't see this doing either.
    | Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by DeadGod | [ Reply to This ]
      Nicely done my friend. There really isnt anything I can comment on except that it was something I could understand inside coming from you because it is something that is felt by me as well. Thanks!
    | Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      umm i didnt' find there was much point to your words here. Maybe it should be just one of your thoughts because i don't make much sense out of it.
    | Posted on 2005-03-27 00:00:00 | by mandy dupuis | [ Reply to This ]

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