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    dots Submission Name: Charlestondots
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    Author: deepinthought
    ASL Info:    24, F, Shaw AFB, SC
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 72/96/19
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 253
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 746



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       man, theres no place like home and i wanted to try to express that. i miss the southern grace i traded for kangaroos down under.


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    dotsCharlestondots
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    O Charleston I am called to you,
    A daughter of your Grace.
    To walk your streets forever,
    A spirit of this holy place.
    From Main Street down to Market,
    I make my nightly roam.
    Knowing in my ghostly heart,
    Only here will I be home.
    A woman bred of gentleness,
    My soul lies in the Charleston breeze.
    A snowy Magnolia bound in my hair,
    Living a life of Southern ease.
    I see the dogwoods in my dreams,
    Open my eyes to the ocean’s waves.
    My soul is there and ever loves
    No matter where my body lays.
    Charleston, love, I hear you….
    I know you call my name.
    Come back to me you whisper,
    Come back to me and stay.




    Submitted on 2005-03-28 00:47:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i dissagree with majinkenshibamv i think it shows ones fondness of their home town the writer is not saying this is the only place she wants to venture but the place that hold their hart and soul i wanna see charleston through your eyes
    | Posted on 2005-04-14 00:00:00 | by Wook | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like the rhythm in this piece, and the things you use in comparison are quite articulate. I definitely understand your subject matter, and can relate. Although I also think you should realize that desiring to live in one place forever is quite narrow minded and not very open to change and evolution at all. I don't know your story, so I can't say for sure, but I know that we all need to grow up and get out sometimes, even when we think we've already grown up as it is. Change is good if you are willing to accept it, but like I said I don't know your situation. I think there will always be things you miss from everywhere if you look deep enough.

    So to your poem, great expression and relativity and I think you are quite talented. Perhaps I'll check more of your work later. Take good care and good luck on your plight.
    | Posted on 2005-03-28 00:00:00 | by majinkenshinamv | [ Reply to This ]



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