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To the baby boy in my hands

Author:	neonlights
ASL Info:	20, male, europe
Elite Ratio:	2.98 - 145 /133 /59
Words:	144

Class/Type:	Poetry /Misc
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To the baby boy in my hands

When did we become a bag of confused emotions?
Hate, anger, frustration- they are all there
Just put your hand in and choose

All depressed, as if we are shadows about to face the dread of night
Without spirit, seeing but misery around,
We should be dead!

Cry, bleed, feel
Grab my hand, all I'm looking for is a warm touch
Look, apprehend, believe
But there are liers under every stone

When were we told to stop hoping
To circumcise our dreams into petty wishes
To live as halfs dreaming of being complete?
As if to deal with one's self is not enough

Little baby, as I hold you in my hands
I pray to God, to Universe and Stars
Make this one different, give him eyes that can really see
Through people and spells, let this child just be

Submitted on 2005-03-28 09:30:48 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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holy [censored] *gawks...* okay first of all i luv it a lot. this was likie better than the last one i read and that tone was really good. i hope you keep writing becasue i am adding this to my favs and, oh yeah i forgot i love the last stanza

Little baby, as I hold you in my hands
I pray to God, to Universe and Stars
Make this one different, give him eyes that can really see
Through people and spells, let this child just be

i wis i were that baby but i guess i am not but any way it was great...
THNX

-Nammy

| Posted on 2005-03-28 00:00:00 | by Namlooc20 | [ Reply to This ]

I have held many children and thought the same kind of thoughts... wish there was a way to wave a wand and help shape theri destiny somehow.

| Posted on 2005-03-28 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]

i think that these are my favorite lines

When were we told to stop hoping
To circumcise our dreams into petty wishes
To live as halfs dreaming of being complete?
As if to deal with one's self is not enough

the rest was okay to me but this was what gave it a kick for me. good work keep them coming lili

| Posted on 2005-03-28 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]

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