I kinda lost myself somewhere there and had to go back to the beginning to read once more and try to find the flow. I didn't really understand what brought all of the poem together. Apologies? Curiosity? Maybe if yourself a bit more clear. Proper punctuation marks would go well and make it easier to read. I'm sure that if you patch it up a little it'll be a great poem!
Not a bad work. I would perhaps change the fourth line to "and settling on the soul" or somesuch. As it is, it doesn't entirely flow in the proper tense. It seems you are talking about false apologies-I would hope true apologies aren't sucha terrible thing.
Hmmm....I would say this is ok. It needs some work. I think it is choppy. It doesn't have all that great of an ending to me either. I don't think it really fits. I think it was about someone appologiseing and then the other person doesn't except it. I don't really know. Maybe if you put more imagrey in it i could get a better interpretation out of it. Mikki