*Starts to glare but stops and smiles(ignoring comments)* This is so sad. Lonliness pours through it, it makes my heart ache. Lonliness can be so hard to get through. I mean, you can be in a room full of people, and still feel so damed lonly! *Sighs* Francis, you are suck a great guy. I hate that you ever felt so low. *Gives you a huge hug* You are cared about! A LOT! Just think about how much everyone freaked out when you were going to...yeah, that thing...I feel bad actually saying it... I hope you know what the hell I am talking about.
*Cringes* I looked at the comments again...I'm sorry if this upsets you...but I am going to tell you right here and now...that the comment Kim made pisses me off...quite a bit...now you really are going to hate me...
*Sighs* I am still going to continue reading you other poems.
Don't worry, one day you'll wake up from your nights rest to see me laying right beside you. looking into your eyes, wondering when you'll wake from your dreams. Now to the poem, it was really good. The structure and the rhythm worked very well together. Nice job.