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I never thought that the world Could influence me to this degree But it's not the world Instead influenced by our own country People like us Racism lives As well as more discrimination And I don't understand How we separate Into our own cliques So he's pushing me away You're pushing me away Pushed away By the ones I can love Especially by Him The one I care for That doesn't see I exist And I can't do a thing To force someone to love you back Is the same as pushing them away Driving them away In a new direction Discrimination Racsim Just because We don't have the reasons You're still pushing me away As everyone else has And if I force you It's the same as pushing you away.... |
damn... you'r either 1- the most forgetfull person ever. -or 2- the slowest writer ever. HURRY UP. | Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by WD20x2 | [ Reply to This ] | I'm a bit lost on this piece as well. You were talking about discrimination and racisim and then went on to talk about someone who you love that doesnt know you are alive...perhaps you don't fit in to his "group" of friends? | I dunno...*shrug* | Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ] | I think i got a explation out of this or whatever. Well auctually i have 2...someone is making fun of you for your background or whatever. And the other one...someone you like is making fun of you or pushing you away, i'm getting the person you like out of it. I don't know maybe i'm wrong. From what i see it is good. I don't think it should matter what you are or where you came from, but people are people and they belive what they want and it really sucks sometimes. I dont' know if i can relat to it though. .. | MiKkI | Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by MiKkI25 | [ Reply to This ] | I'm not quite sure what the issue is in this piece. I see something about race and a male but it is not easily understandable. Clean it up a bit, do some clarification... | XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX | Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ] | I have to confess, I am not sure if I get it it or not. It sounds like your man or you have different color skin and that he not wanting to take the risk of what people will think. | Pride in our national heritage is the root of all prejudice. | Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ] | Amy you said I wouldn't get this. I kind of do dear.. Well there is a lot of messages I got out of this.. Many of which we just discussed.. But than I got another vibe.. dOnt ask.. People making fun of you...haha that did happen before because of your backround.. But I dont think you meant anything by that.. But I dont see why he is letting you go.. Seriously he is a complicated person if you ask me.. | Um I would say this is not your best.. I thought it would be way better. You have a huge gift.. and this didnt really get me excited.. Sorry to say... I am sure youll think of something to write... stephanie | Posted on 2005-03-29 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ] | |