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    dots Submission Name: Mystery of Lovedots
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    Author: Bang
    ASL Info:    29/F/Philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 20/16/6
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
    Total Views: 311
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       The two person inlove in a special little world that few ever experience...


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    dotsMystery of Lovedots
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    An open window of discovery
    Creates a mystical ecstasy
    Not just sensory
    But love that words cannot carry

    Intimate physical embrace
    Slow motion of massage
    Stirs passion that builds desire
    Spreading the whole existence

    There is no need to rehearse
    Passionate fever with patience
    Sharing one space
    It will happen out of rhythm, out of silence

    Go very slowly… with taste…
    Taking every flavor with care
    And there’s no need to hurry
    enough time is there...




    Submitted on 2005-03-30 00:19:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a very interesting poem.
    "There is no need to rehearse
    Passionate fever with patience"
    remind me of love making and how patient and loving a partner should be.
    It's a cool poem so keep up the good write, I hope everyone reads it, it could open up some closed eyes.
    | Posted on 2005-03-30 00:00:00 | by Charlenee | [ Reply to This ]
      Is the mystery Love, or just the physical aspect? I see thouhts and ideas in this piece that you can run with. I don't know how to put my finger on it, but to say it needs something....
    | Posted on 2005-03-30 00:00:00 | by mimi | [ Reply to This ]



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