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    dots Submission Name: what is lovedots
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    Author: webdevil
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 113/105/43
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotswhat is lovedots
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    Love is the eternal
    beauty in your soul
    that embraces me
    in your heart.




    Submitted on 2005-03-30 11:29:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great and amazing ditty. It really requires a great skill to express a great idea in few words. Love indeed is the eternal beauty as it makes the world and it's denizens beautiful.
    | Posted on 2017-09-07 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this its simple but to means alot. i dont know how to use as beautiful words as you in the comments youve given me but i love it.
    | Posted on 2005-08-05 00:00:00 | by crazzybeautiful | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and sweet. It could stand to be a little longer, so you can embellish on your idea, but it's great nonetheless. I love how it's only one sentence long, but it says volumes.
    | Posted on 2005-03-30 00:00:00 | by Areinaka | [ Reply to This ]


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