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    dots Submission Name: Vine Flowersdots
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    Author: reveries
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 54/74/23
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       well.....sense no one read One-Winged Butterfly....which is what comes before this one....I advice you read this....and go back and read that one if you have the time.....otherwise enjoy


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    dotsVine Flowersdots
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    I see it...
    my dream escape from reality
    We dance on burning
    balls of plasma, and
    cry teardrop candies
    under our Diana moon.
    Whisper poetry into
    seas of orgasmic
    rain...sopping us
    in overwhelming
    emotion.
    We sing to grass
    as it bends with
    the winds of
    early April - -
    Dreams climbing and
    blossoming
    like vine flowers
    in the mind
    of a young poetess.
    Come to me
    my dream
    my escape
    And I will write
    you into
    existence.




    Submitted on 2005-03-30 17:26:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is awesome...I can see your words growing like that of the vine flowers...it takes you up and up and I think this is just beautiful.
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      YOU ARE A TRUE POET! WOW THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. IT MADE ME FEEL GOOOOOOOOD!
    I WILL READ...ONE WINGED BUTTERFLY.
    VERY GOOD WORK YOU ARE DOING!
    | Posted on 2005-03-30 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]
      reveries,i can see now why you wrote what you wrote about my poem "a little about you".your style is very much like mine and you have a very florid way with words.you are on the way to a very rewarding time with your work.good luck and fare well. SoNNy
    | Posted on 2005-03-30 00:00:00 | by sickly | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh wow! "Come to me, my dream my escape and I will write you into existence" I'm floating on those words. I thought this was a good write. "Sopping us in overwhelming emotion" Good play on words. I likey ty xoxox
    | Posted on 2005-03-30 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]


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