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    dots Submission Name: THERE GOES THE SEASONdots
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    Author: kittycampbel
    ASL Info:    23 male uganda
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 53/72/25
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Prose/Longing
    Total Views: 413
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 671



    Description:
       just advisory to a young peer in school


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    dotsTHERE GOES THE SEASONdots
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    Here ends the season;as well
    Here comes the reason;why you're here
    Arise ye academic warrior
    Hast thou broken thine chains
    Hast thou shaken off the shackles of failure
    Purge thineself now with unflinching determination
    Forget everything contrary except
    The Lover of your soul
    Yes it is God,who stands by a hardworker
    Cast every of your anxieties to him
    During these hard times so full of care
    May you sour to great hieghts in success
    Die a little hard because remember;
    success is for the vigilant and not
    For the Idle ones
    A season's success I wish thee!




    Submitted on 2005-03-31 11:36:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      gwe, u can really make someone wake up and read books. this is totally fresh coz i have never heeard of a poem about education(maybe its coz i do not read a lot-hehehe) but this is nice, lots a rhymes,and rhythm-its cool.
    | Posted on 2005-04-03 00:00:00 | by nevender | [ Reply to This ]
      I found this to be very inspirational and encouraging. Wish I'd had someone like you when I was in school, to encourage and urge me onward. I admire your faith in God, and your love for life... And as always, you have a way of warming my heart when I read your writings. This one is very good!

    Take Care!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-03-31 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi, I'm not exactly going to be reviewing your poem, rather I just wanted to seize the opportunity and say hello to you and other fellows from Uganda, as well as the African people. It's quite a surprise, and a good one, to find African writers here at Eliteskills. Keep writing, keep posting, we sure would like to see more from your side of the world. It's good to know eliteskills is getting multi-cultural.
    | Posted on 2005-03-31 00:00:00 | by smily | [ Reply to This ]



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