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    dots Submission Name: +*+*+*Chasing you+*+*+*dots
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    Author: JD_Heckle
    ASL Info:    19/THE Male/Briarwood
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 46/66/23
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 210
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1382



    Description:
       have you ever chased death?


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    dots+*+*+*Chasing you+*+*+*dots
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    I've been through hell I can tell in this tale
    I constently chased you, down a winding trail
    a trail of trees, a trail of leaves
    full of everything even false beliefs.
    the eyes beyond the trees stare as I run
    and animals growl from the dark away from the sun
    I keep going, the thought of catching you is passion
    I run through headlights on a road without crashing
    the trail is changed now lights all around
    but only your traces are left to be found
    I follow
    through all the buildings and the roads
    thugs stand aside as a gun explodes
    by the side of my head, they talk as I fled
    I could have hid but I chase you instead
    past the city and on the water
    It should be cold but your trail got hotter
    over beautiful waves bigger than you thought
    I see you on a piece of land and you're about to get caught
    a wooded area ahead and there you are
    just three trees away and believe thats not far
    just an arms reach away, my eyes under your spell
    I touched your shoulder but I tripped and I fell
    with unbelieving eyes I see you get away
    I get up and run as the sun sets ending the day
    back were I started where you were originally found
    I've been through the world
    chasing you around.......




    Submitted on 2005-03-31 17:55:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      that was good...your kept going and going and going and going and i just kept reading and reading and reading and reading. and then in the end it's at a point where all that was said although i thought it was just like a place where if you'd chase someone, you just follow wherever they go until you catch them, it didn't look like the world but that was a nice figure of speech. I really liked how you kept going and going and going and then like a crash, a stop.
    Well done.
    | Posted on 2005-04-01 00:00:00 | by charmedidentity | [ Reply to This ]
      I acctually liked that -it was a wave of fury of thoughts that just rushed I even read it fAST- CAUSE THAT WAS THE TONE OF YOUR PIECE. I wqas gouing through the elite new ones and I read your other one and then this one caught my eye because I saw it on your list but is it under a different name or something or did zI miss something?
    L A M E M A N S T E R M S
    | Posted on 2005-04-01 00:00:00 | by LameMansTerms | [ Reply to This ]



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