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    dots Submission Name: Po' Folks = Rich in Life & Lovdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 282
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 465
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       Thank you Great Sprit, Lord, Vincent, Emerson, Thoreau, Salvador and Gala, Jonathon, Chad, Hyproglo, friends and soul mates, Shakespeare, Picasso, Kahlil Gibran, Jimmy "WEBMASTER", authors 2 many 2 name, ELITE WRITERS and FRIENDZ.

    I stopped for a minute and realized I could turn eternity into a smile ; > }

    We have the ability....we have the LOVE....LOVE, PEACE, JOY!!!

    "For at intervals an angel descended into the pool and stirred the water. Whoever got in first after the agitation of the pool enjoyed healing no matter what ailment he suffered." John 4 vs. 4

    This is what we have already been gifted if only we accept. This is what is sent out to all those in need, sorrow or dismay. AMEN


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    dotsPo' Folks = Rich in Life & Lovdots
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    I have been so inspired, as of late, by the unquestionable and unexolainable beauty which can truly be found in ALL when 1 stops looking at "IT" through conditioned eyes.

    I sat this afternoon with the warm Spring Northern California foothills sun shining warmingly over the peaks and valleys. My 12 buzzard life-time companions soared as spiritual Thomas Jefferson kites; sending volts of electric spiritual energy to anyone fortunate enough to welcome "IT".

    The winter geese couple sat atop the rock and squabbled with each other stopping only to greet me good morning when I reached a stretch out for them. Early morning companions we share a morning welcome and engage in joyful conversation of thankfullness and LOVE.

    The poppies of brilliant yellowish-orange radiate and reflect the magnitude of the rising morning sun. Closed yet reaching still as a silent trumpet, as the sun peaks over the nearby hill their petals of existence open as if in animation and greet the day. With this vigor should we all greet each new morning and be thankful for all days eternal.

    A friend's birthday-lunch of delicious Chinese food broke open a fortune cookie: "What the mind can conceive and believe it can achieve".....

    "Intergalactic" planetary the Beastie Boys check, check, check...Dali Llama inspired message of love not limited by space and time.

    The moon is calling my name and the celestial stars have invited me out to play. May all of us remember that dreams are truly reality and reality is but a lesson in time which we represent in rhyme...time, thyme, INFINITE GIFT IN "IT".




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      I like the descriptions you use, some comic (the geese) and some lyrical. This has a nice 'in the moment' feel. Realizing each moment is a gift is a true revelation. Nice work.
    | Posted on 2005-04-01 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      This was wonderful,Like fresh air for my heart and mind.I enjoyed this whole-heartedly,Thank you for this.Your description of the beauty we have around us was immaculate,This is true we don't stop to look around us and appreciate GOD's work like we should.If everyone could stop and take a deep breath and look around them, It just might make the day a little bit more better.You seem to be the master at that, As you have certainly proved it with this wonderful piece.

    Take care and all the best to you.
    | Posted on 2005-04-01 00:00:00 | by Winterbliss | [ Reply to This ]
      You are brilliantly beautiful and I am greateful that my heart has been touched by you...if even given a sweeping glance I would feel all the better. This writing just makes me appreciate all that we are, all that we were and all that we are all meant to be. The fact that one person can feel this way gives us all hope that each and every one else on this planet can feel the same. Thanks again...and again...and what the hell...one more time...thanks! P.S. That was a great, great line that magnicat pointed out...awesome.
    | Posted on 2005-04-01 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      The moon is calling my name and the celestial stars have invited me out to play.

    i just love that line. there is so much beauty around us in nature, i have been enjoying it especially lately as i drive for FedEx and get to drive through some beautiful landscapes. i just posted a poem called God's Country that describes what i saw today. too many people miss the simple beauty of nature. i see that you do not miss it at all and appreciate the wonder and beauty of God's Country. thanks for sharing this.
    | Posted on 2005-03-31 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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