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    dots Submission Name: Baby Do U Remember "Finsished"dots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 295
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    Baby do u remember the nights
    I held u tight while we dance under the moonlight

    Baby do u remember the nights
    I started to kiss your neck, when I lit the candle lights.

    Baby do u remember the night
    I led u though house by putting down a trail of rose pedals and all we did was cuddle.

    Baby do u remember the nights
    we showed r lovers to each on top of those covers.

    Baby do u remember
    how I said I like the way u freaked it and how rode it like u where in a rodeo.
    I will never take that back,
    because I Looked at you shorty
    you really have it going on
    I liked the way you moved it girl
    When the dj played are song.

    Baby do u remember those nights
    o I sure do, and will never be able forget u.
    yet I every time I think of u
    My heart skips a beat and goes 10 times faster then the normal heart beat

    Baby I hope u remember
    O I hope u do
    If u don't than screw u

    Baby do u remember the nights
    I would come home after work, and bring u a rose every day, because I can't go a day without a giving something other than my love.


    Baby do u remember the nights
    I would stare into your beautiful eyes
    and I would not get tired because u saved my life from the knife. That once held my life.

    Baby I sure hope u remember
    because this is my love song to u.
    Because u are the one and the only one I love.





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      i agree with tom anyguy who wrote this really should show it to his girl.i mean if my man wrote me something even a little close to this i would melt.
    | Posted on 2005-07-22 00:00:00 | by endmypain | [ Reply to This ]
      i agree with tom anyguy who wrote this really should show it to his girl.i mean if my man wrote me something even a little close to this i would melt.
    | Posted on 2005-07-22 00:00:00 | by endmypain | [ Reply to This ]
      wow any girl would love this poem great work nice size nice wording i really liked it you have got a nack for love poems good work-tom
    | Posted on 2005-04-03 00:00:00 | by tom111111111111 | [ Reply to This ]


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