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    dots Submission Name: love is unknowndots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 620
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 411



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    dotslove is unknowndots
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    Love is unknown
    to the ones
    who don't seek it
    Every One's heart breaks
    After a love one passed
    It's a guarantee
    Like the breaking of dawn
    And the moon rising high at night
    All you can do is move on.
    Once love get's
    a hold of you
    you will know
    and you will never let go
    of your true love




    Submitted on 2005-04-01 17:24:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really like thispoem and it is very true once you find your true love you will never lket itgo.you will fight with all you have.the only thing i would change about this would be the length.i think it would be much better if it was longer.but that is jus my opinion.we all have diffrent ways but other than that i likeit
    | Posted on 2005-07-22 00:00:00 | by endmypain | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked this poem i think you could have written a little bit more but other than that it was great i liked hearing your views on love
    | Posted on 2005-04-10 00:00:00 | by kcck | [ Reply to This ]


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